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Title: pls help
Post by: Saxturian on 16 December 2019, 03:07:46 PM
anyone speak Spanish reasonably well? got an essay that will make or break my grade, and my Spanish teacher told me I damn well better make it good because she's tired of my shitty essays. if u speak it or have taken it past like Spanish 2 or 3, pls help me and read it lol I will love u forever
Title: Re: pls help
Post by: Airbongo on 16 December 2019, 07:38:59 PM
I will help you, son.
Title: Re: pls help
Post by: Saxturian on 16 December 2019, 07:50:19 PM
I will help you, son.
Mexican superman. its due in like 3.5 hours lol. I mostly just need my grammar to be checked because my sentence structure and grammar is shit lol. here da link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xT6IdAsmM5hlTYd7x2fBtXAxIpoSujgXgBGb-fEJrEY/edit?usp=sharing

I don't necessarily like or feel any strong feelings whatsoever about the topic but that's what I got. here's the criteria for the grammar:
Gramática:
Acentos y concordancia
Uso de frases coordinadas y subordinadas
Uso de transiciones y conectores
Frases coherentes
Ideas claramente expresadas

edit: im also still working on it so pls excuse my typing whilst reading through it lol
Title: Re: pls help
Post by: Saxturian on 16 December 2019, 10:53:20 PM
I will help you, son.
Mexican superman. its due in like 3.5 hours lol. I mostly just need my grammar to be checked because my sentence structure and grammar is shit lol. here da link:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xT6IdAsmM5hlTYd7x2fBtXAxIpoSujgXgBGb-fEJrEY/edit?usp=sharing

I don't necessarily like or feel any strong feelings whatsoever about the topic but that's what I got. here's the criteria for the grammar:
Gramática:
Acentos y concordancia
Uso de frases coordinadas y subordinadas
Uso de transiciones y conectores
Frases coherentes
Ideas claramente expresadas

edit: im also still working on it so pls excuse my typing whilst reading through it lol
if old link doesn't work dis shit might https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xT6IdAsmM5hlTYd7x2fBtXAxIpoSujgXgBGb-fEJrEY/edit?usp=sharing
Title: Re: pls help
Post by: Akomine on 17 December 2019, 09:33:51 AM
I will help you, son.
its due in like 3.5 hours lol.


oh god lol
howd that go?
Title: Re: pls help
Post by: Saxturian on 17 December 2019, 04:41:31 PM
I will help you, son.
its due in like 3.5 hours lol.


oh god lol
howd that go?
my guy air helped my sorry ass. long story short I didn't get to submit air's edits and got an 82 even tho I thought it was way better but w.e, fuck that class
Title: Re: pls help
Post by: gerrit70 on 17 December 2019, 08:16:28 PM
Mexican superman.

Agreed.
Title: Re: pls help
Post by: luisc99 on 17 December 2019, 09:30:55 PM
and got an 82 even tho I thought it was way better

I don't know how your school system works but where I'm from 82 is a pretty good score
Title: Re: pls help
Post by: Saxturian on 17 December 2019, 10:01:20 PM
and got an 82 even tho I thought it was way better

I don't know how your school system works but where I'm from 82 is a pretty good score
well the average final grade for the class is an A- and I ended with a C+, so it's not all that good lol. I tried my best tho so im good wit it