It was alright.
my suggestions include some more of Village craft, honestly there was only a few villages and a lot of nonsense
get some more cinematic shots to really show of the beauty of some of the villages, and
some cleaner transitions between shots, some of them just jumped and it seemed sloppy.
stay away from dark areas because, when ever a Minecraft video goes up, the caves on youtube look so dark
I always wonder why the creator of the video just forgot a chunk and left a blank slide with music playing over it (could just be my light settings on my monitor)
and the music.... eh it could just be me but it honestly was a poor choice of song maybe because its in so many other videos
and over used.
and this response is just advice for the next video you put out
and im sorry if I offended you in anyway
no rage please.
Sincerely
~LimeOcean