Draft of the Concordat of Socrates

[Theologist_Green (OP)]

Concordat of Socrates
Preamble
Under the pretenses of law, there is a need for the governing to be moderated by a set of rules enforced by the masses consent. This document outlines the rules of which the ultimate ruler of Socrates must abide by and the purples of such.

The purpose of government is not to burden, but to protect the rights of and tends to the needs of the citizen.

Section 1 - King
Part 1-
The Natural Leader of Socrates is the leader of the House of Particles, by blood in the real world from the eldest child onward from his most respected King Spaceparticles.


Part 2-
The King solely has the right to rule from the permission of the masses, any and all violations of citizen’s rights outlined in Section 3 invalidates his rule and will prompt a new government.

Part 3-
The King may put into place policies and laws with the express permission of a majority of a convened council of all of the Princes and Protectors.  These laws are Kingdom level and fall over all of Socrates’s domain.

Part 4-
All Kingdom level laws and policies overrule any and all town level laws.

Part 5-
Any town has the respected right to leave the Concordat as they see fit, but in doing so lose all protection of natural rights granted by the Concordat. Under the king authority, he may choose his advisors, and chooses what towns may enter the Kingdom under this Concordat.

Part 6-
All Kingdom land that is not a part of a town is the land of the people and can be used for all purposes of the people

Part 7-
 The King cannot form a formal army under the name of the state or tax the people without the express permission of all of the Prince and Protectors. Both needed by the ladder requirement.
Section 2 - Prince and Protectors
Part 1-
The state cannot exist with just the blood of the family.  Protectors our citizen leaders outside of the family who have the same status of the Princes

Part 2-
Princes are defined as the blood of Spaceparticles, through either real life or Roleplay means.

Part 3-
The Princes and Protectors have their own right along with the rights of the citizens. When ruling over a town they are granted the express permission to run the town under the government of desire of their own with the clause that; 1. They adhere to the rights of Citizens in Section 3, 2. Do not break any laws or policies in place by the King with the consent of a council of convened Princes and Protectors

Part 4-
While Princes and Protectors are not obligated by law to own a town. It is the title of Protector that is given to any leader of a town that enters the Kingdom or that is already a part of.

Part 5-
Furthermore, Princes and Protectors may voluntarily choose the means of which their town’s Protector or Prince is chosen or promoted. They may also transfer their power to another individual with the required means being for both processes:
1. A document is written to outline the process of selection or transfer of power.   2. The King is formally notified of the change of power or government and is given a copy.
3. For Princes the title must be passed down to a blood of Spaceparticles

Part 6-
Under these clauses, we established a council of convened Princes and Protectors with the following rules.
A Prince or Protector can only have one vote even if they run more than one town within the Concordat.
To have the honor of partaking one must conduct themselves fair and proper.


Section 3 - Citizen

Part 1 -
We hereby define the residence as someone who is active in one of the towns, meaning that they use it has there home, for storage, sleeping, and ownership.

Part 2 -
The citizens whom must be a resident of one of the towns of Socrates are given these rights given to them by humanity, not by the leadership.
The Right to Life: We will not promote others to harm you. This harm is meaningless in the prospect of deathlessness. It only acts as a nuisance that is unjust.
The Right of Liberty: We will not impose ways of thinking onto our citizens or do anything in a way that would suppress thought or speech. The citizen is free to say what they say and do what they do, within reason that doesn’t infringe on the rights of others.
The Right of Property: The House will not interfere with your property be it for organized of a malicious intent or that will infringe on your freedom to develop it as you wish

Part 3-
We hereby let this concordat be changed by the will of a ⅔ majority of the council of convened princes and protectors.
Part 4
Once it is suitable for the permission of the council of convened princes and protectors through a majority. It will be created, a new house of citizens that will ask with the convened council to pass laws and new laws from their forth must be passed by both the convened council and the house of citizens. Or by when the convened council stops the bill, by 2/3 majority of house of citizens. The King is no longer needed to pass laws at the point of passing.

[Theologist_Green (OP)]

Any feedback? This is what I and my dad had agreed on and discussed. Some edits will probably come. Like defining a citizen and the like.

[Akomine]

Any feedback? This is what I and my dad had agreed on and discussed. Some edits will probably come. Like defining a citizen and the like.

My feedback in red:

Concordat of Socrates
Preamble
Under the pretenses of law, there is a need for the governing to be moderated by a set of rules enforced by the masses consent. This document outlines the rules of which the ultimate ruler of Socrates must abide by and the purples of such.

The purpose of government is not to burden, but to protect the rights of and tends to the needs of the citizen.

Section 1 - King
Part 1-
The Natural Leader of Socrates is the leader of the House of Particles, by blood in the real world from the eldest child onward from his most respected King Spaceparticles.


Part 2-
The King solely has the right to rule from the permission of the masses, any and all violations of citizen’s rights outlined in Section 3 invalidates his rule and will prompt a new government.

By what method will the King be removed? / Who will do it and enforce it? / What if the King refuses or disagrees, will there be a court?


Part 3-
The King may put into place policies and laws with the express permission of a majority of a convened council of all of the Princes and Protectors.  These laws are Kingdom level and fall over all of Socrates’s domain.

Part 4-
All Kingdom level laws and policies overrule any and all town level laws.

Part 5-
Any town has the respected right to leave the Concordat as they see fit, but in doing so lose all protection of natural rights granted by the Concordat. Under the king authority, he may choose his advisors, and chooses what towns may enter the Kingdom under this Concordat.

Is there a specific method required for a town to leave? A vote of the owners? All of the owners consent? A vote of the citizens? Any method the town sees fit? If the latter, then perhaps this requires no edit, and each town can choose their own method.


Part 6-
All Kingdom land that is not a part of a town is the land of the people and can be used for all purposes of the people

Part 7-
 The King cannot form a formal army under the name of the state or tax the people without the express permission of all of the Prince and Protectors. Both needed by the ladder requirement.
Section 2 - Prince and Protectors
Part 1-
The state cannot exist with just the blood of the family.  Protectors our citizen leaders outside of the family who have the same status of the Princes

Part 2-
Princes are defined as the blood of Spaceparticles, through either real life or Roleplay means.

Part 3-
The Princes and Protectors have their own right along with the rights of the citizens. When ruling over a town they are granted the express permission to run the town under the government of desire of their own with the clause that; 1. They adhere to the rights of Citizens in Section 3, 2. Do not break any laws or policies in place by the King with the consent of a council of convened Princes and Protectors

Part 4-
While Princes and Protectors are not obligated by law to own a town. It is the title of Protector that is given to any leader of a town that enters the Kingdom or that is already a part of.

Part 5-
Furthermore, Princes and Protectors may voluntarily choose the means of which their town’s Protector or Prince is chosen or promoted. They may also transfer their power to another individual with the required means being for both processes:
1. A document is written to outline the process of selection or transfer of power.   2. The King is formally notified of the change of power or government and is given a copy.
3. For Princes the title must be passed down to a blood of Spaceparticles

Part 6-
Under these clauses, we established a council of convened Princes and Protectors with the following rules.
A Prince or Protector can only have one vote even if they run more than one town within the Concordat.
To have the honor of partaking one must conduct themselves fair and proper.


Section 3 - Citizen

Part 1 -
We hereby define the residence as someone who is active in one of the towns, meaning that they use it has there home, for storage, sleeping, and ownership.

Part 2 -
The citizens whom must be a resident of one of the towns of Socrates are given these rights given to them by humanity, not by the leadership.
The Right to Life: We will not promote others to harm you. This harm is meaningless in the prospect of deathlessness. It only acts as a nuisance that is unjust.
The Right of Liberty: We will not impose ways of thinking onto our citizens or do anything in a way that would suppress thought or speech. The citizen is free to say what they say and do what they do, within reason that doesn’t infringe on the rights of others.
The Right of Property: The House will not interfere with your property be it for organized of a malicious intent or that will infringe on your freedom to develop it as you wish

Part 3-
We hereby let this concordat be changed by the will of a ⅔ majority of the council of convened princes and protectors.
Part 4
Once it is suitable for the permission of the council of convened princes and protectors through a majority. It will be created, a new house of citizens that will ask with the convened council to pass laws and new laws from their forth must be passed by both the convened council and the house of citizens. Or by when the convened council stops the bill, by 2/3 majority of house of citizens. The King is no longer needed to pass laws at the point of passing.

This is a very good constitution! I like it. It has some minor spelling errors, but otherwise it is great. Like I mentioned above, the only thing in question is removing the King / forming a new government for breaching the constitution. How exactly will it happen? Otherwise, nice work.

[Fuzzy_Yeti_69]

Ako is still a double gay